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Acrostic Haiku Entry- Spyglass

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Stars, Moon, Clouds; Over World
Pieces of the vast heavens,
Yet Rest in His Eyes
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This Is my entry for the Writer's Club contest about acrostic haikus. The challenge was to make a Haiku that is also an Acrostic poem. I actually had fun with this, though I didn't think I would. Its actually rather good for my first Haiku.

Good gobbers though if it wasn't for my RhymeZone.com I wouldn't have known how many syllables I had. I thought all my one syllables were two . . . I can't count. xD

Also Wasn't sure what category to put this in . . .

Oh, and the down words spell "Hearts Spy You" so as to be liasons. They didn't have to make sense together, but I thought it was good for them to. It also kind of gathers the meanings together.
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Nephthys010's avatar
I :heart: RhymeZone.com

I used the same thing for mine :)